I was learning to use juicy verbs
Jumping out of the car, storing wind tried to blow me away. Getting my fishing rod
and carefully putting the bait on the fishing rod. Then threw my fishing line in the sea and my fishing line floated away. So I pulled the fishing line. And I said It is a fishing failure. We went for a short cool walk to the beach. My little sister was sitting on her pram. Pusing my noisy little sister, Sarah was laughing so loud with fun. I saw waves smashing on the side of the concrete wall. The waves were tiny. We went home in the car.
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